Fragments
Three Ways to Fix Fragment:
1. DC,IC.
2. IC DC.
3. IC.IC.(DC -/+→IC)
Exercises:
1.As she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy.
-As she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach,Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy.(DC,IC.)
-Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy as she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.(IC DC.)
-She scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.(DC -/+→IC)
2.Even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.The vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school.
-Even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck,the vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school.(DC,IC.)
-The vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.(IC DC.)
-The windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.(DC -/+→IC)
3.I went to the Griffith Observatory.Because I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.
-Because I wanted to leaned more about the planets and the universe,I went to the Griffith Observatory.(DC,IC.)
-I went to the Griffith Observatory because I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.(IC DC.)
-I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.(DC -/+→IC)
Three Ways to Fix Fragment:
1. DC,IC.
2. IC DC.
3. IC.IC.(DC -/+→IC)
Exercises:
1.As she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy.
-As she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach,Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy.(DC,IC.)
-Nicky vowed never again to let the bathroom get so filthy as she scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.(IC DC.)
-She scrubbed the tile grout with a toothbrush and bleach.(DC -/+→IC)
2.Even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.The vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school.
-Even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck,the vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school.(DC,IC.)
-The vehicle that has dependably taken her everywhere since middle school even though the windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.(IC DC.)
-The windows leak and the paint is peeling,Karina loves her old pick up truck.(DC -/+→IC)
3.I went to the Griffith Observatory.Because I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.
-Because I wanted to leaned more about the planets and the universe,I went to the Griffith Observatory.(DC,IC.)
-I went to the Griffith Observatory because I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.(IC DC.)
-I wanted to learned more about the planets and the universe.(DC -/+→IC)
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